2011年6月2日 星期四

Discussing Cause 1

There are many reasons that influence me to choose English as my major.  To begin with, my father who likes English very much inspired my interest in English as I was little.  In my childhood, my father sometimes talked with me in English; moreover he paid money for foreign teacher in order to give me more opportunities to practice English fluently.  Therefore now I want to learn more in English.  Additionally, I hope I can be a great English teacher in the future.  For the purpose of meeting my expectation, I choose English as my major to master in English.  Last but not the least, speaking English has become a mainstream in the society nowadays.  If I master in English, then when I get into trouble in other countries, I can express my thought in English to local people and foreigners with more details and more clearly so that they can help me deal with my problems.  As what mentioned above are what impact me on choosing English as my major.

5 則留言:

  1. mainstream應該不只侷限在society耶~
    可能在國家甚至是世界各地都可能有
    details和clearly兩個詞性不一樣,and是連接兩個同等東西唷!

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  2. more details and more clearly (details 是名詞,clearly是副詞)

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  3. clearly是副詞喔!
    clarity(n.)我上網查是這個~
    1.(思想、文體等的)清楚; 明晰
    2.清澈
    妳看可不可以~

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  4. 除了那個clearly那邊其他都很OK囉~

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  5. my father who likes English very much inspired my interest in English as I was little.
    who前面要逗點變成補述用法,不然這樣看會認為妳有好多個爸爸喔!!
    第3行後面moreover後面要逗號喔

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