Contrasting 2 -revised

There are two people sent resumes to apply for a new English instructor in my school.  One is Debra Fines, and the other is Lynn Whitnall.  Debra has more education than Lynn.  The former studied philosophy at PhD Linguistics in University of Pennsylvania, MA English in University of Toronto and BA English in McGill University, whereas the latter only studied Spanish in International High School.  Besides, Debra experiences more employment than Lynn does.  Debra was a swimming teacher, a teaching assistant at Linguistics Department in University of Pennsylvania, and an instructor at Intensive English Program in University of Vermont; now she is a consultant and author.  Unlike Debra, Lynn was an English Instructor in Tokyo Girls High School, now she is a Spanish teacher in International High school.  Additionally, Debra has published English books, but Lynn hasn’t.  When it comes to their language ability, Debra can speak English and French.  On the other hand, Lynn is fluent in Spanish, French, and Japanese.  Compared to the two resumes, I would like to hire Debra Fines because she has more English experience than Lynn does, and I hope Debra Fines can do the job well.