2011年5月26日 星期四

Expressing an opinion-2

     Our authority concerned must use the death penalty as a form of criminal punishment.  Although some people insist that using the death penalty as a form of criminal punishment isn’t a good way to deter the crime for the judge could pronounce erroneous sentence, which may trigger their family feel sorrow, I think there are few possibilities for the judge to announce the wrong sentence as they would look into the crimes thoroughly.  Some may stand up for that human has the rights to survival, so it doesn’t justify using the death penalty to decrease the crimes.  However, the counterargument is that those who commit homicide don’t treasure their live and others’, so if not using the death penalty to diminish the crimes may cause more cases than ever before and there will be more victims killed by the murders.  Additionally, no one can argue against the fact that if the criminals are sentenced to life imprisonment, people are under no obligation to pay money for the criminals to have meals in prison.  Due to all of these reasons, one must conclude that our government should use the death penalty as a form of criminal punishment.

6 則留言:

  1. Our authority concerned must use the death penalty as a form of criminal punishment.
    -->Our authorities concerned that they must use the death penalty as a form of criminal punishment.
    第三行isn’t a good way to deter the crime for the judge could pronounce erroneous sentence這句我不懂....
    human通常都用複數
    survival是名詞唷!其實我不確定have the right to 後面是接原動還是to是介系詞...
    counterargument是忘了加空格嗎?
    文章架構很結實!

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  2. 第二句後面有點不懂@O@
    其他都寫好好看來你可以穩坐金龍小老師的位置哈哈

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  3. Our authority concerned must use the death penalty as a form of criminal punishment. (怪怪的 好像少了什麼)
    sorrow好像沒有形容詞的用法喔!!

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  4. 順暢喔~用字好難
    我也是第二句後面看不懂~

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  5. 有點看不懂第二句
    用難字是好事
    但要確定用法唷~!

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