2011年5月19日 星期四

Comparing 2 --- Revised

     Both John Adams and Thomas Jefferson were important Americans.  They played significant parts in American Revolution.  Additionally, like Thomas Jefferson, John Adams was delegated to the Continental Congress.  When it comes to Declaration of Independence, John Adams was one of the signers, and so was Thomas Jefferson.  Moreover, not only did they study and practice law, but they were also presidents of United States.  On July fourth, 1826, John Adams died. Likewise, Thomas Jefferson passed away on the same day. There were many similarities between John Adams and Thomas Jefferson.

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  1. Additionally, John Adams was delegated to the Continental Congress like Thomas Jefferson.
    -->Additionally, like Thomas Jefferson, John Adams was delegated to the Continental Congress.

    Moreover, not only did they study and practice law, but also were he president of United States.
    -->Moreover, not only did they study and practice law, but they were also presidents of United States.

    On July fourth in 1826 John Adams died. Likewise, Thomas Jefferson passed away on this day.
    -->On July fourth, 1826, John Adams died. Likewise, Thomas Jefferson passed away on the same day.

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