Global warming has been an important issue for several years. On account of global warming, there are more and more influences come with it. With the temperature rising, the icebergs melt away and seas rise day by day. Finally, rising seas that threaten coastal areas, so people who dweller in coral reef islands such as Tuvalu have to move to other countries. Additionally, we’ll have food shortage. Many plants can’t rise and animals can’t live in the environment of high temperature. Little by little, lacking food will bring about famine in many countries. Besides, animal diversities will decrease, for some animals aren’t able to live in high temperature. In the end, animals will never exist. As what's mentioned above, it will be more and more problems resulting from global warming. All we can do now is to protect the environment from being worse.
1)第三行的seas rise 怪怪的可是我不知道要怎麼改
回覆刪除其他都很好=ˇ=
sea不可數吧!
回覆刪除可以寫sea level rise day by day
animal diversities will decrease, for some animals aren’t able to live in high temperature.這點有重複到喔!
轉折詞很棒!
回覆刪除結論句很好呢^^
你的finally怎麼會在中間阿!??
回覆刪除Finally在中間感覺有點奇怪...
回覆刪除sea可數嗎?
sea不知道可不可以+s耶 有人說加s是海域的意思所以在查查看囉
回覆刪除然後其他都很好喔