Julie and Judy are my good friends and they have some similarities in some ways. As for appearance, Julie has long hair and so does Julie. Moreover, Julie’s eye size is similar to Judy’s. When it comes to personality, Julie is as quiet as Judy. Additionally, Julie doesn’t like to do complicated things and so does Judy. As to capabilities, two of them are good at drawing and writing. Last but not the least, they are at the age of seventeen. As what mentioned above, Julie and Judy are alike in many ways, if Julie doesn’t wear a pair of glasses and isn’t taller than Julie; it’s easy for me to make mistakes.
轉折詞用得很好呢!!!不像一般看到是以first為開頭
回覆刪除如果可以的話能再描述得更詳細一點~
轉折詞都超好!!!
回覆刪除eye size哈哈哈
回覆刪除挖~~你在寫我們班的Julie 和Judy嗎
這篇寫的真好
回覆刪除最後一句可以再加上to tell them會更清楚
寫得很讚~簡單又明瞭
回覆刪除各個方面都比較到了~Perfect~
終於有一篇比較短了
回覆刪除但是依然寫的很好!!!