2011年4月28日 星期四

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     I find a piece of interesting news on the newspaper, and it says, “A severe car accident happened on the Washington Street this morning, and the police found something interesting when they kept a record of the two careless drivers’ licenses.  One of the drivers is a man called Stephanie Brooks and the other is a woman named Ann Friedman.  Both of their driver’s licenses are released from the Department of Motor Vehicles in Alabama State.  Besides, Stephanie Brooks’s brown eyes are the same color as Ann Friedman.  Moreover, his hair color is similar to hers.  Not only is Stephanie Brooks 5 feet and 3 inches in height but Ann Friedman is.  Finally, Stephanie Brooks was born on July thirty-first in 1981, and so was Ann Friedman.”  Little do I believe that one’s personal information may be the same as other, after I read the news.  Perhaps some day I could meet someone having something in common with me. 

7 則留言:

  1. 寫的很好還有情節耶=ˇ=
    描述的很仔細,只是我寫Stephanie是女生欸

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  2. Little do I believe that one’s personal information may be the same as other(the other 或others?)

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  3. 我覺得連接詞用的很好
    然後結論句也很不錯

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  4. Stephanie Brooks 是女的喔!
    結論句讚喔!Good~

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  5. 沒有問題!!!
    內容很棒很流暢

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  6. 流暢內容讚
    給你PRO級~~~

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  7. 寫的都蠻好的
    只是應該是兩個女性作比較不是男生跟女生喔!

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