I find a piece of interesting news on the newspaper, and it says, “A severe car accident happened on the Washington Street this morning, and the police found something interesting when they kept a record of the two careless drivers’ licenses. One of the drivers is a man called Stephanie Brooks and the other is a woman named Ann Friedman. Both of their driver’s licenses are released from the Department of Motor Vehicles in Alabama State . Besides, Stephanie Brooks’s brown eyes are the same color as Ann Friedman. Moreover, his hair color is similar to hers. Not only is Stephanie Brooks 5 feet and 3 inches in height but Ann Friedman is. Finally, Stephanie Brooks was born on July thirty-first in 1981, and so was Ann Friedman.” Little do I believe that one’s personal information may be the same as other, after I read the news. Perhaps some day I could meet someone having something in common with me.
寫的很好還有情節耶=ˇ=
回覆刪除描述的很仔細,只是我寫Stephanie是女生欸
Little do I believe that one’s personal information may be the same as other(the other 或others?)
回覆刪除我覺得連接詞用的很好
回覆刪除然後結論句也很不錯
Stephanie Brooks 是女的喔!
回覆刪除結論句讚喔!Good~
沒有問題!!!
回覆刪除內容很棒很流暢
流暢內容讚
回覆刪除給你PRO級~~~
寫的都蠻好的
回覆刪除只是應該是兩個女性作比較不是男生跟女生喔!