I’m regard as an optimistic and polite person. Every day I wear a smile on my face and say thank you to whoever helps me. I believe that if my classmates see my smile, they’re also in a good mood and it’s more likely for me to achieve everything successfully. Finally, I was elected as politeness model by my classmates. Also, I believe in the creed that look on the bright sight. As I’m faced with difficulties or my failures, I always try to hold an optimistic heart and try to figure the best solution. Plus, I’m a positive student. I attend many English competitions to improve my English ability and enrich my experiences. To my surprise, I won the stunning performances in the first year and the third in my second year in English composition contest of my school. Besides, I always do everything with all my might. It’s my belief that the more effort I make, the more likely I will succeed. In high school, I spend lots of time learning English along with my second language, Japanese. I not only do my best to remember lots of new vocabulary and grammar but also read some books to enhance Japanese culture.
I not only work hard on my school work but also participant actively in my extracurricular activities. In my pastime, I like to read novels, watch animation cartoons and movies, and listen to English and Japanese songs. I like to read novels, for I enjoy regarding myself as the main character in novels so that I can experience different lifestyles and stories. After reading every novel, I can grasp what the novels tell about, learn some good sentences in novels, and stimulate my imagination to improve my writing skills. Besides, I prefer to watch movies, cartoons, and listen to songs not only because I can feel relaxed but because I can improve my English and Japanese listening ability. As for my specialty, I’m good at playing the Trombone and recorders. I played the recorders with my classmates in elementary school, and played the Trombone in junior high. Every time we practiced together, I felt relaxed and content with the melodious songs. Also, I was treasure the moment we performed and the happiness on the audience’s face.
I’m regard as an optimistic and polite person.
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Finally, I was elected as politeness model by my classmates.中間突然有finally出現感覺很奇怪...
I always try to hold an optimistic heart and try to figure the best solution.
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and played the Trombone in junior high.
你的school去哪呢?
Every time we practiced together
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I was treasure the moment
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問題上面都有提到了:>
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