My favorite movie is Harry Potter And The Deathly Hallows, a science fiction, which is about how the main characters Harry, Ron, and Hermione figure out the clues left by Albus Dumbledore to struggle with Lord Voldemort. The movie is filled with magic, adventure, love and strong friendship between each other. I am fond of this movie, for I learn a variety of precious things from it. To begin with, it takes guts to accomplish every mission. Since the three main characters are brave enough to defeat the demon, I hope I could be more courageous like them to fulfill significant tasks, face the difficulties, and challenge plenty of adventure to improve myself . Additionally, mutual trust is the key to the success. In the movei, the three charters trust each other in the war so that they can wim. As far as my concerned, if I believe that my teammates can defeat other team on the relay race, I will be more energetic and there will be more likely to win the race. Last but not the least, it is of crucial important of doing the best to achieve the goals. Harry figure out the clues and fight the Voldemort with all his effort. As an old saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” implementing my goals with all my mind instead of giving in to obstacles, maybe someday all my goals will be carried out. As what are mentioned above, not only do I learn many things from this movie but I get lots of pleasure from this movie as well.
In the movei(movie)
回覆刪除so that they can wim (win)
然後我覺得你寫的好多好多,跟我剛好成反比!!
可是你寫的超級棒!!
movei是moive
回覆刪除用詞很讚喔!!!!!Perfect~
找不到什麼錯誤唷~!
回覆刪除有拼字一點點點點的錯誤而已.
寫的很讚!!!
As far as my concerned~ my 好像要改成I am 喔
回覆刪除你寫好多好通順 給你 燈燈燈燈燈 五個燈!!!!!!!
哈利波特是科幻片???
回覆刪除文章內容很多很豐富
前後句子連接也很順暢唷!
寫的很棒欸
回覆刪除每次都找不到東西可以寫