My family is taking a trip here for a week, but this morning my younger brother James got lost when we played in the amusement park, so please help us to find him as soon as possible. My brother is as tall as I, being thin and athletic; besides his hair is dark and short. He has small black eyes and wears a pair of blue glasses. Additionally, my brother is twelve years old, and his skin is a little black. When he was last seen, he was dressed in a white T-shirt with a big and red heart on the front of the chest, blue shorts, a pair of black sneaker, and a watch on his left hand. If you see my brother, please call me, and my cell phone number is 0988183911. Thank you.
besides後面要不要加個逗點??
回覆刪除如果沒加就變成介係詞了
skincolor用dark會比較好一點喔
on the front of 的on是不是要改成in?
內容很棒唷!!!人物描述得很好
描述的很詳細哦:)
回覆刪除My brother is as tall as I 小姐妳沒交代妳多高- -!
回覆刪除My brother is as tall as I(我不知道你的身高，所以我也不知道你弟弟的身高喔)
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回覆刪除如果你加上你有多高這一篇就完美了~
回覆刪除My brother is as ~besides his ~dark and short.逼塞斯後面要不要加個小蝌蚪(,)?沒有加的話好像是在旁邊的意思喔
回覆刪除My brother is as tall as I 大家不知道你幾公分~所以公分還是要寫吧!
回覆刪除你最後一眼看到他穿的衣服跟他被找的時候,穿的衣服一樣吧!用過去式怪怪的~